Documentary First Draft

My first draft of the documentary for robotics mentor Steve Forbes is going pretty well all things considered. I'm currently using a program called Sony Vegas Pro since I have a lot of experience making robot showcase videos from being a robotics student and now a mentor myself. The interview footage was okay for the most part but there was a lot of static and the background wasn't that great. I was able to remove most of the static in Sony Vegas but some parts were unrecoverable. What I want to do next is get interviews with maybe one or two of his students explaining how his mentorship has helped them achieve their goals. I also need some fancy white text on black background introduction to topics. Overall though,, it's coming along pretty fast. Here is the first draft: