Please post your documentary here: either in a link to the Youtube page or a link to this blog where you posted it last week. Please then watch and respond to all group members blogs in a letter to each member, answering the following questions:
1) Does it make sense?
2) What is the filmmaker's intention as far as you can tell?
3) How is the "flow" for a) content and b) editing?
4) How does it make you feel?
Tell the filmmaker what is going well and what needs clarifying or enhancing. Suggest edits, ask questions, comment on the feeling you are left with at the end. At least 1/2 page double spaced for each letter. Bring digital or paper copies with you on Thursday to class.
Group One: Matthew , Brennan , Taylor , Natalie , Jana
Here is the link to my documentary: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=baqymfS7iiI&feature=youtu.be
ReplyDeleteDear Natalie,
DeleteI really like your documentary topic and I think it is very relatable. I think it makes sense and I am not confused at all on what is being covered. As far as I can tell, your intentions are to get a fellow ASU student's opinion on the dining hall food and other food options available on campus. I would say you have pretty good flow for both content and editing because whenever you ask the person you are interviewing a question you cutaway to footage that relates to what they are saying. Your documentary gives me a light and "fresh" feeling. I think your music choice suits the mood of the documentary and you did a good job controlling the volume so that it does not overpower the voice of the person being interviewed. One suggestion I would have would be to make the footage fill the entire screen if that is possible. Other than that I think you did a nice job.
-Jana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W4vMEk8UtjA&feature=youtu.be
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