Please post your documentary here: either in a link to the Youtube
page or a link to this blog where you posted it last week. Please then
watch and respond to all group members blogs in a letter to each member,
answering the following questions:
1) Does it make sense?
2) What is the filmmaker's intention as far as you can tell?
3) How is the "flow" for a) content and b) editing?
4) How does it make you feel?
Tell
the filmmaker what is going well and what needs clarifying or
enhancing. Suggest edits, ask questions, comment on the feeling you are
left with at the end. At least 1/2 page double spaced for each letter.
Bring digital or paper copies with you on Thursday to class.
Group
Two: David D , Mittal , Tyler , Jeremy , Bryce , Jessica
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q30JjZmAJr8&feature=youtu.be
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-2uyovXmAPs
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8aI3ToAAiw&feature=youtu.be
ReplyDeletestill going to work on editing and aligning everything but here is what i have so far.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UyW21iNAP0Q&feature=youtu.be
ReplyDeleteThis is a ROUGH draft. I still have tons of editing to do and things to add.